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Post by thehoundsrasplol on Mar 11, 2015 4:39:35 GMT
Hello,
My first time posting something like this so bear with me. My beta reader was checking something out in ACOK to verify my fic and she came across something and asked me what I thought. I read the passage over and over and we both came up with the same thoughts. We could very well be wrong.
Here is the passage from ACOK, the Sansa chapter where she meets The Hound on the terrace above her chamber. I will underline the line in question. She is in the Godswood with Dontos.
Ok reading this it seems as Dontos is the one that said to try not to be afraid, but after reading several times, the previous and following paragraphs, myself and ellebh were left wondering if in fact it was the Hound that said that, either when he was actually rescuing her or maybe in this nightmare she is recalling. The next paragraph goes to say that the whole city was afraid and then she thinks about the smallfolk locking themselves in but that the Lannisters looted and raped who they wanted the last time King’s Landing was sacked. Next paragraph, starts with: Dontos was prattling on making me think Sansa was not really paying attention to what he was saying. Anyway back to the line in question: do you think it was Dontos trying to reassure her or did the Hound say this when rescuing her or even maybe he said it in her nightmare, reassuring her? I myself think it is the Hound saying it in her mind. She is thinking once again how he rescued her here, lost in thought while Dontos is blabbing away. Also when someone else speaks, usually a writer will start a new paragraph. This line was the last line. It is italicized in the books. Anyway we have never noticed anyone mention this before, maybe someone else has noticed this too. Thoughts?
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Post by katie on Mar 11, 2015 4:58:33 GMT
Okay... So weird that I never noticed this before! But yeah, I don't see how this could have been anyone but Sandor. Sansa has drifted off into LaLaLand while Dontos is talking (as she's wont to do) and thinking specifically and viscerally about the riot and how the Hound rescued her, so who else could it have possibly been? Good catch!
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Post by katie on Mar 11, 2015 5:05:49 GMT
Actually, I might have to amend that. A few paragraphs before this, Dontos says: From there, Sansa goes into the paragraph that you quoted, remembering the riot. The second " Try not to be afraid!, he said" seems to be Sansa repeating Dontos's line in her head in an exasperated manner, like, "Pfft! Yeah, right!" And she immediately follows up with "The whole city was afraid." As if to counter his statement. Soooo yeah, if it weren't for the fact that Dontos had JUST said it, then it would make sense that it was Sandor. But now I'm not so sure. Sorry...
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Post by sillierthings on Mar 11, 2015 15:24:16 GMT
Yes, I'm afraid I agree with katie's reading that it was Dontos who said it, but on the other hand, in closely reading that paragraph, I think we can find a few things that are interesting all the same. Dontos has told her not to be afraid, but she thinks about the horror of the bread riot where she is reflecting just what the mob could have done to her if "the Hound had not cut his way to her side." It's just one more bit of evidence that when things are really bad, when she's in terror, there has been only one man who has been able to help her. She's certainly doubting Dontos because with just him to help her, how can she help but be afraid (and isn't it later in this chapter, atop of Maegor's Holdfast, that she wishes Dontos had the Hound's ferocity)?
I also think it's interesting the way GRRM had Sansa remembering here that Ser Aron had his head smashed with a rock. Maybe she just learned that the way everyone else did, after the fact, but remember that The Hound reports that to everyone when he gets back with Sansa from the riot.
If Sansa is remembering this, did the Hound do this after he had saved her? Was she watching him as he tried to save Ser Aron as well? If so, she sees that he did not just try to save her, though that was first and foremost, but he was trying to help the others as well--one of the only, if not only, members of that royal party to do so--except for Sansa who encouraged Joffrey to give the coin to the woman with the dead baby. But more to the point, I like the way GRRM often has Sansa ans Sandor notice the same things and report them at different times in the narrative. Another example of this is when the Hound asks her if she remembers how Ned's legs "danced" when he was beheaded. The answer is, yes, because right after the execution in AGOT, Sansa is thinking about it and the most horrible thing was how her father's legs had jerked when he was beheaded. It shows a certain connection between the two, they are noticing the same things, thinking about the same things. Even when the both end up on top of Maegor's Holdfast before the battle. I know some people think he was lurking to be near her, which is possible, but I also think they both were looking for fresh air, feeling afraid, and these two sympathetic souls ended up in the same place. It's subtle, but I think it's purposeful.
One other thing I noticed when looking up the quotations, look at the way they were riding before the riot began:
The Hound is protecting Joffrey. Ser Mandon is protecting Sansa. We know that when a peasant tries to grab Joffrey's leg, Ser Mandon cuts off the man's hand at the wrist and later, Tyrion confronts Ser Mandon because he was supposed to be Sansa's shield, and she's gone:
Funny how when they mobbed the Hound, the Hound himself thought first of Sansa. This is not the only time Ser Mandon and the Hound are compared. It happens at the Blackwater, too, when Tyrion thinks to replace the Hound with Mandon, but realizes that the men would not follow Mandon like they did the Hound.
This was a tangent, I know. Sorry!
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Post by thehoundsrasplol on Mar 11, 2015 15:27:43 GMT
You are right. Your first reply was how I felt even though I read the Dontos part a million times. The heart wants what it wants I suppose lol. This is such a great chapter though. Poor Sansa I just wanted to hug her.
Here is another question: Do you think the Hound saw Sansa in the godswood with Dontos? The reason I ask is because when she goes to the terrace above her room, it is written she can see everything but there is no mention of her seeing the draw bridge or the godswood. One could assume because they are not mentioned she can't see them but maybe she just dosen't mention it as she just came from there. It is just strange to me that the Hound was up there, alone, in a place where he could see everything. Did he not have anything else to do? Of course we don't have all the answers and can assume things lol. Well I just assume anyway lol.
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Post by katie on Mar 11, 2015 15:36:31 GMT
Do you mean in this particular scene? I think it's possible, if only because I am convinced Sandor knew she was in the godswood the first time she met up with Dontos, which is why he deliberately intercepted her on the Serpentine Steps. I think Sandor has an awareness of Sansa's whereabouts that others don't, just like people seem completely oblivious to Sandor and Sansa's interactions.
It opens the question of WHY he was on the rooftop to begin with. Tyrion mentions that he has the Hound doing some stuff in prep for the coming battle and that Joffrey's personal guard is handed over to the Kettleback. So, it's possible Sandor was sent off on some task, he may have even been sent to the rooftop as some sort of look out, or alternatively he might have been doing something else and slipped away to be by himself on the roof. He might have even been off duty, though it's unlikely with a battle looming. Who knows, but it makes for some interesting speculation!
sillierthings, I'll reply to your post a bit later, but in the meantime, it was my post you were referring to, not eyesofmist! (heehee, I've done that too) I would like to know what she thinks too, though! ;-)
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Post by sillierthings on Mar 11, 2015 16:14:05 GMT
oops! I changed that .
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Post by katie on Mar 11, 2015 17:02:06 GMT
Okay, re: sillierthings's post above... Yes, the whole beginning of that chapter, Sansa is openly exasperated with Dontos. She makes it quite clear that she's sick of waiting and that he hasn't done jack shit for her. So I guess it's little wonder (a) she remembers the riots and how Sandor went out of his way to save & protect her, (b) she later runs into that TRUE knight of hers later that same evening, and (c) she wishes that Dontos had half the sack that Sandor does. She values Sandor's proactiveness - when shit needs to get done, he just does it.
Yes, yes! I pointed that out the other day how it's very interesting how Sandor just oh-so coincidentally brings up the ONE mental image from Ned's execution that haunted Sansa the most. How did he know that??? As for Ser Aron, I'm sure Sandor probably continued cutting bitches down after he had mounted Sansa......'s horse ;-) In my mind, he just made a beeline for her, slashing at anything and anyone in his way, and once he was on the horse, he tried to do what he can as he made his way back to the castle, but honestly I think his first priority was just getting Sansa out of there. Also, in the TV show, when he brings Sansa back into the castle, his sword is drawn and bloody, whereas it was not drawn when he first tosses her over his shoulder, so clearly he had to do a little more shanking on his way back inside.
And yes, it is interesting to see both Sandor and Ser Mandon's priorities in action, but it also highlights how little the KG regarded Sansa. Joff sends Sandor into the crowd, and Ser Mandon immediately abandons Sansa in favor of Joff, which is more or less understandable since he IS the King, but nobody else bothered to see to Sansa after that... except Sandor. And as we all know, he had little to know obligation to protect her at ALL, but even she states that he deliberately "cut his way" to her (which evokes some very lovely and gallant imagery, no?) while everyone else was content to just let the mob have her.
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Post by eyesofmist on Mar 11, 2015 20:25:41 GMT
Here I am at last! A lot of work today and I have also read all the post together. I also think it was Dontos who told her not to be afraid and I guess Sandor couldn't have said that to her because that's not what he does,he never tries to make reality look better than it is and in the middle of that riot it was normal for Sansa to be afraid. She would have been stupid if she wasn't afraid in such a dangerous situations.
This "gallant action" is one of my favourite between these two. I can imagine him in the middle of those furious people. Joff sent him to his deat when he ordered him to dismount and try to catch the guy who threw filth at him,even Tyrion said to Joff he had killed the Hound. He should have been the one in the most dangerous position but he was the one who risked his own life to save hers. What I find incredible is how people focus on things like the hateful words he tells Sansa and don't give this incredible action important. It is very clear it wasn't something normal, it was heroic and this gives a very clear idea of how much he cares for her.
I think George is making it clear what a heroic deed Sandor made because get to know other people, even a knight that was ahorse were butchered in a savage way. I have read some posts where people say that Sandor could see here that her safety came as a price because what Sansa saw was horrible, she saw him cutting up people. Well, what did they expect? Did they expect him to say, excuse me,angry people,could you leave the lady alone, otherwise I'll have to hurt you? That's rubbish. He didn't exert unnecessary violence, if he had ever hesitated, none of them would be alive.
There is something else I love,when he helps her down the horse by lifting her and placing her on the ground (how gallant is this? LOL),he notices her wound and orders people around, telling the master to see to her cut. Well, he doesn't even seem to notice his own cut. He is also bleeding but thinks of her first. This is very gallant, isn't it? More than that, he thought of her safety before his own when he cut his way to her and saved her,and after that, he thinks of her wound and forgets about his. This gives us an idea what kind of man he is. And there are still readers who don't realise this.
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Post by katie on Mar 11, 2015 20:53:22 GMT
Agreed, it just doesn't strike me as something Sandor would actually say. He does tell Sansa when she doesn't really have anything to fear, like when he reassured her about Ser Boros, but for someone so adamant about being "honest", it would just be silly for him to tell Sansa not to be afraid when they're in the middle of a freaking riot, LOL.
Yes, I get aggravated when people are like, "Well, she was Joffrey's betrothed, OF COURSE he would go back for her!" Oh really, you mean like Ser Mandon and the rest of the KG dipshits did? Yeah, right. If she was so *important*, then someone else would have taken up her guard instead of basically just leaving her to her own devices. Besides, there's a really great passage in one of Ser Barristan's ADwD chapters where he goes into great detail about a KG duties. The tl;dr version of which is, they are obligated ONLY to the king. Everyone else can just fuck off, the king comes first. Sandor was under NO OBLIGATION WHATSOEVER to rescue Sansa, especially given his OWN precarious situation, being surrounded by the mob himself, ON FOOT no less, and having to literally cut his way through the crowd to get to Sansa.
I would also like to point out that he went back for Sansa before he went back for Stranger... ;-) (Sorry, Stranger!)
Yes, time and time again, we see Sandor react violently only when ABSOLUTELY NECESSARY. Sandor gets no sadistic kick out of killing people, like his brother does.
One of the very few things the TV show got RIGHT. In fact, I personally think they improved upon it a bit. The scene where he saves her from the rapists was executed brilliantly. And then the extra little "I didn't do it for you" at the end... Squeeee! That was the moment that SanSan went canon for me. ;-)
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Post by eyesofmist on Mar 11, 2015 22:07:46 GMT
Then you saw the show first? I read the first three books before the show was released and I think it was much better,you know? Because Sandor is so fierce, so raw an dangerous,so incredibly "evil" and scary, foreboding,ominous... He is incredible when you read the books, he is an incredibly scary villain until you get to know that in fact, he isn't,that you were wrong all the time. I've said it's so much better because George's characterization of Sandor is so good, the show doesn't come even near this. When Sandor approached Sansa,like a ghost,as if materializing out of the shadows because Joff tells him to escort her, I was as anxious as her to wake up anybody,I was so afraid for her,biting my nails,full of fear. This was masterful from George,because the impact when he told her about his past was amazing then. I was shocked to see how I had only seen a cardboard villain and that guy was clever,ironic,witty and he hurt so much I couldn't believe it.
By the time he told her what had happened to him I had already noticed he was very articulate and quick at giving answers that were anything but predictable. He was smart and had no intention of behaving like a moustache twirling villain to my surprise. He did nothing to scare the girl, he said nothing inappropriate either. And the showing her those scars, that broke my heart.
The nasty thung has half his face ruined and you only think that he looks scary,but what about his feelings? It must be horrible to see everybody trying to look elsewhere but your face. All the pretty girls thinking you are a monster when all boys want girls to like them and then reach the age of thirty feeling like a monster,like a maimed dog and nothing else.
When he tells his story I was in awe,shocked by those horrible scars and then that sweet story of a kid who wanted to play with a wooden knight, a puppet, and the that tragedy. Gosh!
The show spoiled this effect completely. They didn't make Rory seem evil enough to start with, his scars aren't horrible enough. If he had escorted Sansa I wouldn't have felt so scared,and the worst of all is that I think Rory could have done it. He could have carried it out because he did a good job even with the shitty lines they gave him.
I'm so glad I never saw the show first, the feeling that terrible Hound gives is completely lost,Sansa is dull, Littlefinger is a cartoonish villain, Cersei is a drama queen, Tyrion has nothing to do with book Tyrion,etc, I also have to say that I loved show Robert because the actor was great, I also liked Cat, Rob, Theon and Tywin in the show, very much. I quite liked Jaime too, but on the whole, the writing is awful and I can't stand the show. Sorry if you like it because I don't want to sound too nagging, but I can't stand the mistakes, so I cannot watch what may be good any more.
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Post by katie on Mar 11, 2015 22:35:08 GMT
I think I should clarify, I was referring ONLY to the Riot Rescue Scene on the TV show. I did see the show first, but the books are, of course, far superior! It was just that one scene that I thought they did a good job with.
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Post by eyesofmist on Mar 11, 2015 23:23:42 GMT
They did a good job with some scene in the first season. I was just trying to explain that Sandor is veeeery scary in the novels, and that is different in the show. I like Rory's version of the Hound but he is never half as scary. It's difficult to express how scary and hateful he feels in the books and how much I hated him when he killed Mycah. That was different in the show, really different but it is difficult to explain how you feel when you have that idea of the character and then the writer has the ability to turn your feelings round,you feel manipulated in the best of ways. The impact you feel is much stronger.
I was only trying to explain how I felt about this, it was a bit the same with Jaime but it didn't surprise me so much because he had done more or less the same with Sandor before and it wasn't so unexpected. I can't compare the rescue scene in the show with the one in the book because I had stopped watching the show by then, so I can't say if the scene is good or not.
The problem is that I got so angry with what I saw in season two that quit and never tried to watch it again, so I can't even criticize what happened letter because I only saw gifs and pictures on tumblr.
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Post by katie on Mar 11, 2015 23:38:53 GMT
Yeah, I can't imagine the constant let-down book-readers must have felt at getting screwed over at every turn by the TV show. In that respect, I'm kind of glad I didn't read the books first, because I don't know if I could have handled that sort of relentless disappointment, LOL. Instead I had the opposite experience of watching the show and falling in love with these characters and their relationship and then discovering that there was even MORE to it in the original source material! Of course, it is still disappointing though, realizing how much more it COULD have been and all the missed opportunities after the fact. Anyway, I give props to the riot scene, though, because they did make Sandor look quite heroic and they kept the important parts of his dialogue intact (for a change). IMO, anyway, LOL.
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Post by eyesofmist on Mar 12, 2015 0:38:28 GMT
I liked season one, there were things like Ross, for instance I disliked, or how they managed Sandor and Sansa,or Cersei,who I don't like in the show, but in general I liked it and enjoyed watching it. The problem is that the more the show uses original meterial and deviates frome the original source, the worse it is. They have good actors and locations,it was quite a good adaptation in season 1,but then it started getting worse, IMHO, of course.
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